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I Miss You Like Crazy


Things seemed great from the start
Things seemed so wrong as we grew apart
I tired to make us work
Oh I tried my very best
But you called it off cause we never progressed

If only you knew
Oh if only you knew how much I miss you

I miss you like crazy
You were my world
I miss you like crazy
I need you back in my life girl

Without you life's void of happiness
Without you joy is hit-or-miss
I am alone with only myself
I have no one to seek comfort in
No one to save me from my sin

If only you knew
Oh if only you knew how much I miss you

I miss you like crazy
You were my world
I miss you like crazy
I need you back in my life girl

Odds are stacked
Stacked against me
But I'll win you back
You'll see

If only you knew
Oh if only you knew how much I miss you

I miss you like crazy
You were my world
I miss you like crazy
I need you back in my life girl

I'll help you see
Help you see that you love me
I got the idea for this poem from the cap of a Sobe bottle, "Miss you like crazy"
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irwingreylord Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
nice to see some lyrical poetry around!
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MusicIsEverything16 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! ^_^
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irwingreylord Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
no prob!
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DysonJones Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can relate to this....really I can.
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MusicIsEverything16 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Too many of us can
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DysonJones Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*sigh....ain't that the truth. -_-
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iamabrassgoddess Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011
I had the exact same bottle cap. That is why I searched it.
Anywho . . . this is an amazing poem. I love it!
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MusicIsEverything16 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha awesome!
Thanks :P
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Tara-the-Brave Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOL The poem is all so serious, and then I read the description and where it came from! XD Oh I'm sry, I just find that so hilarious!
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MusicIsEverything16 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yea, it's kinda funny. I just got inspired by the saying on the bottle :P so I used it
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Tara-the-Brave Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Lol Gotta love Sobe. :P It gives ppl inspiration! ;D haha! XD
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MusicIsEverything16 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
haha yup =D
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Sartosis Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011  Student Writer
I love it.
I miss you like crazy
You were my world
I miss you like crazy
I need you back in my life girl

Just love it. When you read it out, it sounds more like a song.
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MusicIsEverything16 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! =)
It is a song :P
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Sartosis Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2011  Student Writer
Lol, oops. Well, now you know that it works very well!!!
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MusicIsEverything16 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lol yup =D
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jasonxyzabc Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011
vary vary gude
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MusicIsEverything16 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanx =D
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LeonDude Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011
:headbang: <------ Ignore this, it's random. lol

This is pretty good. Hehehe, Sobe IS good for somethin'!
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MusicIsEverything16 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks Kyle
Yea! It is!
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